Ana

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So beautifuly written ❤️😭😭😭😭

Didn't finish the whole story ...but read some of it ...I cried so much at the news about Daniels death .and now the ending with him .17 years old . Knowing she was the reason for all of this dream of his .I felt it .felt her pain ,grief and also sadness of seeing him again , younger , trying to save him .you truly did a wonderful job with this story and it broke my heart . We never get our happy endings in our own way .

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Perfect

This was such an amazing story. Tyler's past was really hard and the breaking moment between them towards the end before he left , in the park was so touching ,so real, You did really wonderful,I cried so much during reading it,In the sad, emotional parts of it . This will be put in my favorites cause I really love it .I love their bond , especially the emotional parts from Chloe ,cause I'm reacting as her . Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯

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Love it

I love Jake so much . Tye bond they both have it's crazy accurate and real . And I'm exactly like Chloe .....I still wait for my knight in shining armor and have my fairy tale . Tho ... reality hits harder when you live in it . But I want to see this story gets a beautiful ending that deserves it. 😍😍😍💯💯

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Loved it

Another masterpiece, after my likes of course,a story , a bond and characters that they stay together and fight for their love . ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Perfect

I loved the whole story so much . Part 1 and 2 . The bond between Taylor and Max was amazingly developed. His small reactions , twirling her in his arms , him tossing the ring in the air in the end and then interlacing their hands got me so emotional . I will say at the beginning (part 2 ) I was terrified and mad she will hurt Max ,but it turned out it was their plan. I want a Max for myself .... 😍😍 Can you bring him out to life ? 😁😁💯 You did wonderful with this story ..I'm already into the rest of your list and I can say 😊😏😏 .

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Beautiful story

I loved reading the way Jaxon "sin" and Willow created the bond between them . I'm glad I can read a real and normal story with real connection. Real love . That's how men should behave towards a woman, especially when they love her . ❤️❤️❤️

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