Ariel Low

NYC

Hi, I’m Ariel, and I write down some of the crazy shit that goes on my brain.

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I WANT TO BE HONEST...

Firstly, I’m sorry because I don’t know how to say any of this without seeming like a bitch. Your usage of the word gay when describing Sponge Bob was unneeded and made me feel uncomfortable. With that being my main concern, I feel like it’s also important to note how the book is very fast paced, and the characters lack reasoning and depth. The way I perceive it is that the author gave the main character a plethora of abuse as a child to try to add to her character, but it only took away as it seemed excessive and relatively unrealistic. She seemed perfectly fine after her childhood, when most people who have gone through similar events spend YEARS getting well enough to even face the world on a day to day basis. All of the characters seemed childish and impulsive, and no aspect of the book, except for maybe the plot, could be considered usable for a published piece of literature. That being said, the plot, however cliche, has the potential to be a kickass book. The author merely has to work on their craft, which let’s face it, starts off questionable and progresses into something more notable. Keep on writing, because the first copy isn’t birthed amazing. That being said, be careful with anything that can be perceived as homophobic, racist, etc. (not saying there were racist aspects in here but I couldn’t read past the gay bit)

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Amazing book with like two small errors

Okay I love love LOVED this book but there are two major things wrong with the plot.

1. In order for you to get a job selling fo Merck you MUST have an MBA. My mom had the same exact job as Ronald.

2. Princeton University does not give out full rides EVER. I’ve never seen it and I’ve lived in Princeton my whole life. It’s not possible

Regardless of these small errors, I loved the book so much. Definitely an amazing 3 hours well spent.

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Professional Quality

I have not a single complaint or different wish about this book. It was well thought out, planned, and included a very unique and interesting plot and setting(s) which were almost a character themselves. I would recommend this book while I’m laughing and crying from laughing at 3 am. Heck, I’m not even awake or laughing or crying at 3 am.

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