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Ashtyn Emerson
Absolutely love!
I just finished the second chapter and am completely captivated! I love your story line and characters! Definitely going to continue reading! great work!
Read the story nowGREAT start
This is a very unique concept! I've never read anything like it and am very intrigued! I am anxious to know what happens next! Keep up the awesome work!
Read the story nowGreat start
I absolutely love this! I love the dynamic of each character, and how it feels like you are there feeling what they are feeling. I do have one question however. Are Kyle and that guy(forgot his name, I apologize) who saved him friends? Other than that I think this is great! Can't wait to read more! :)
Read the story nowGreat work!
I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. I really connected with your characters and could see everything you described in my mind as I was reading, I really hope you continue, because I see this being really great!
Read the story nowHard to read
This was really hard to read, but in many ways I sympathize with a lot of what you said. Although I can only imagine the emotional scars that you were left with after experiencing such trauma, I want you to know that what happened isn't your fault. I know what it's like to not feel loved by a parent and feel like a worthless piece of garbage, but I've learned that seeking forgiveness from the person that hurt you will only hurt you more. It's only when you seek forgiveness in yourself that you start to feel better. What happened to you does not define you or hinder you from who you want to be. Great piece though. Definitely felt my emotions pulled in every direction.
Keep writing and remember that when it comes to your dreams, the sky's the limit!
Very poetic
I loved this very much! I didn't want it to end. I could picture everything you were saying and it was magical. Great piece.
Read the story nowHas potential
This has a lot of potential to become something truly great! It just needs another glance over and a little polishing, but I think you are off to a great start! I can't wait to read more. Keep going!
Read the story nowMore! More! More!
Oh my gosh I have absolutely no words for this! This is definitely different than anything I've ever read, and I mean that in a good way. I was engaged from beginning to end, and I hope you continue this because I would LOVE to read more!
Read the story nowCan't wait to continue reading!
This is very intriguing, insightful, and just overall a very entertaining read! I like your character development and the effortless flow of your story. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
Read the story nowGreat start! Can't wait to read more!
This is a great start! I love the concept and can really see this story going somewhere interesting! I can't wait to read more!
Read the story nowVery powerful
As I was reading this, I was pulled in every direction. It was a very powerful sentiment. I have respect for people who do poetry, and you definitely have the knack for it. Keep it up!
Read the story nowgreat start!
Love your writing style and I love the dynamic of your characters! Keep it up! I see this becoming really great!
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