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d(>_< )So Good!!

Okay first of all i'm just gonna say- I LOVE how you give us the little details, like when you talk about how she wishes her eyes would change to purple as well- those little moments are HUGE building blocks in a story, so props to you! ( ´ ▽ ` )b
You're an incredible writer by the looks of it! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, I will definitely get to the other two once I finish working on my own story, lol! ^^ Keep up the incredible work!

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This is very good for your first fanfiction! It's certainly much better than my first one, believe me. But I feel as if a stronger plot would help make this a little more sturdy. However, keep up the good work! ^^
(PS, if you're ever looking for an editor, I'd love to help you out ^^ I'm not a professional, I'm still just a highschooler myself, but I've been writing fanfic for 8 years now. I've been editor for some popular stories on wattpad, so if you need any help, let me know!)

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