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*cough* my gay ass out here kinda wants to marry charlie

i love how you gave the two such unique personalitiessss-
i love the plot, i love the characters, i love charlie with all my heART-
aIIEIEI i love everything about it uwu

i just kind of wish there was a little bit more detail on the characters' actions along with their dialouge. there's a lot of dialouge, but not enough detail ;w; like, for example, when charlie came into cade's bedroom and looked around, you could describe him walking around and letting his eyes scan pictures on the wall or something- just an idea, you don't have to use it at all, its your story and its already incredible! ^^

but otherwise i fricccin lOVE this with all of my heart- it's the exciting romance I wish I had, lol! Right when I see you update it I will immediATELY stop whatever I'm doing to read it owo

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d(>_< )So Good!!

Okay first of all i'm just gonna say- I LOVE how you give us the little details, like when you talk about how she wishes her eyes would change to purple as well- those little moments are HUGE building blocks in a story, so props to you! ( ´ ▽ ` )b
You're an incredible writer by the looks of it! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, I will definitely get to the other two once I finish working on my own story, lol! ^^ Keep up the incredible work!

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( ´ ▽ ` )b

This is very good for your first fanfiction! It's certainly much better than my first one, believe me. But I feel as if a stronger plot would help make this a little more sturdy. However, keep up the good work! ^^
(PS, if you're ever looking for an editor, I'd love to help you out ^^ I'm not a professional, I'm still just a highschooler myself, but I've been writing fanfic for 8 years now. I've been editor for some popular stories on wattpad, so if you need any help, let me know!)

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