Ava Elizabeth

Cheras

Writing is like sex. First, you do it for love, then you do it for your friends, and then you do it for money. I hope I would keep entertaining all of you with my writings.

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Good Work

I really enjoyed this novel. It's wonderfully written and with a clear plotline. The plotline of the novel is truly new and refreshing to read, but what really surprised me is the author's ability to turn it into a quick thriller storyline. The writing style is really clear and engaging, and it did keep me engaged fully. I'm can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Apart from that, I can't say stress enough about how wonderful lovely, and amazing the characters are. I was surprised when the author turned it into a quick thriller storyline. It was fantastic! You are doing good, keep up the good work!

Anyhow, please look into some punctuation and grammar too as it is minimal errors found scattered. It might be overlooked and small but it would improve your writing style and bring it to the next level. Well, I am not that great with punctuation and grammar either but I am just conveying what caught my eyes.

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Overused theme

I think your whole story and plotline is an overused theme in fiction because there are many novels themed on werewolves and such. On the other hand, the flow of the story is present and there are many unexpected twists too. Your writing style is simple but understandable. Yet, your story still needs editing here and there grammatically, so, I would like to suggest an Inkitt editor edit your piece.

Since you are still young( I saw your age on your profile), it will be a great start if you have an editor here or outside for your work. You have potential in writing, so, that is why I'm suggesting having an editor check your work. Since there were grammatical and a few stylistic errors to the flow of the story, I had some trouble keeping up with your chapters up at times.

Anyways, keep it going and good luck too!

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Distant Lands

I love the starting of your chapter and it kept me going till the last chapter. The whole thing was a new experience for me and I love it to be honest. Punctuations and grammar can be edited a little, here and there. Overall, your work is great, so, keep going! Your style of writing is good and could be improved a little (not that I am good or better than any other authors out here). I am just saying as it occurred to me,

Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to Pt2 of your story!

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Good Writing

I can't for your upcoming chapters because you are good at it! I am going to follow you

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