Ava Elizabeth

Overused theme

I think your whole story and plotline is an overused theme in fiction because there are many novels themed on werewolves and such. On the other hand, the flow of the story is present and there are many unexpected twists too. Your writing style is simple but understandable. Yet, your story still needs editing here and there grammatically, so, I would like to suggest an Inkitt editor edit your piece.

Since you are still young( I saw your age on your profile), it will be a great start if you have an editor here or outside for your work. You have potential in writing, so, that is why I'm suggesting having an editor check your work. Since there were grammatical and a few stylistic errors to the flow of the story, I had some trouble keeping up with your chapters up at times.

Anyways, keep it going and good luck too!

Distant Lands

I love the starting of your chapter and it kept me going till the last chapter. The whole thing was a new experience for me and I love it to be honest. Punctuations and grammar can be edited a little, here and there. Overall, your work is great, so, keep going! Your style of writing is good and could be improved a little (not that I am good or better than any other authors out here). I am just saying as it occurred to me,

Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to Pt2 of your story!

Good Writing

I can't for your upcoming chapters because you are good at it! I am going to follow you