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Your writing is good. But the grammar mistakes and lack of quotation marks make it hard to understand. Please, use some sort of grammar checker. Something like Grammarly will help you with the basics. Now, the plot is good, I enjoyed it. I would suggest when you want to do someone else's pov, you do a third pov. That way, you can do all of the thoughts in one pov. And, it will be much easier to understand what's belong to who. Overall, I very much enjoyed reading it! Just needs some work. Keep it up!
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Just from the first chapter, I can tell this is a good book. Your writing style is beautiful and you describe everything so beautifully. Making it easy to understand what the character is thinking and feeling. I love the way from the start we get hints of her heritage, family and the plot building up. You definitely have a talent!! Keep going!
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This book will keep you up at night thinking what's going to happen. I absolutely loves this book and will read him again. The plot is just on point, not similar to the two previous books, but continue them perfectly. You have plot twists you wouldn't have imagined, and I recommend to read it once on Kindle.
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