ben2234

I write from my childhood paracosm. If I am not editing my earlier works I am working on my indie game.

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Suspenseful!

Annie has a psychopath for a stalker. Living constantly looking over her shoulder is putting a strain on her marriage and is affecting her relationship with her daughter. The choices she makes will either break her apart or resolve her issues.
Readers will genuinely feel for the character and the author does this well through his selection of words.
I suggest that the author choose one specific tense for the story and avoid switching back and forth between past and present tense.
Overall a good read full of drama and tension.

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Fantastical.

Though the story deals with dark themes of death and murder, that we see these disturbing things through the curios eyes of an 8 year old, we get a buffer or a kind of psychological shielding of the horror as the writer makes us implicit in the killings. Anna's thrills and joys become our joys and thrills and we want to see her succeed in her endeavors, no matter how grotesque. A splendid write.

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