bigsis200707

Thatcher AZ

I am a bisexual twelve year old, and I have a girlfriend. My goals in life are to become a neurosurgeon and an author on this app.

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Amazing

This book is amazing! I did knock off some points because of grammar mistakes, but we all make them. I love how you switched perspectives from one person to the other, and Ele's story. Nobody ever acknowledges people like her. I won't spoil anything for anyone scrolling through the reviews, but I can't wait for part three! Keep doing what you're doing.

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Mystics

This book is amazing so far. It had me laughing and crying at some times. The grammar was great, and it was hard for me to find any mistakes. This story really made me put myself in Void's place. I'm not usually a fantasy reader, but it had me captivated. Great work!

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Hum

This book was short, but amazing. It was written well, and I didn't catch any grammar mistakes. The ending (I won't spoil it) was very unexpected, but it ended the right way. Keep it up!

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Heart of Darkness

This book is amazing! I'm not usually into fantasy, but this caught my eye. I haven't read it all yet, but so far, I can't get enough. Like myself, you did make a few spelling errors, but other than that, five stars. Great work.

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The Best Book I've Ever Read

I rate four stars because there were a few grammar and punctuation errors, but in all seriousness, this book is the best book I've ever read. That's saying something. I'm a bookworm. Today, I created a new reading list. It is called favorites. This book is in that list. Keep this up. If and when this book is published, I will buy.

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Chilling

This book was written the right way. The ending was unexpected, but perfect. Great work. Although the grammar needs a little work, this is one of the best horror books I've ever read. I would buy this book. Great work!

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The Underworld is Here?!

This book was such an amazing read! Honestly, I loved the rhyming. I would never be able to rhyme like that. Grammar was... not the best. Let's just say there's a lot of room for improvement. I'm never really interested in the gods(except for Him), but this really caught my attention. Great work!

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SINISTER

This book is amazing so far. And, you were right. It's hard for me to stay calm with the cliffhangers. The grammar could use some work here and there, but this book is something different. The twists are very dramatic. Keep up the great work!

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The Courage to be Vulnerable

I love your poems so far. The grammar could use some work, but I like how you tell your readers when the poem is personal. "Hopeless Love" and "Rose" really touched me. It's amazing when an author can touch a part if me that I either locked away or never want to forget, and you did that. Keep up the great work!

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King's Queen

I loved it. I'm not in to Greek mythology, but this book had me captivated. I've heard thus story before, but the retell of it is amazing. Great job!

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