blazingretrix

I’m very interested!

I’m loving it so far, I can relate from when I was in high school. The twist in the story when she almost turned him down and then like shouted out to him, showing her true feelings. I loved that bit. “Daniel angelic voice” just spell check that 😋 Looking forward to more!!

Captivating

I have always been interested in people’s inner feelings. I love how you expressed yours in a round and indirect way. As the reader it made me think, thank you for sharing!