blubirdxox

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The Alpha's Baby Boy

Very good writing style, love the characters that you've created and how they come across as individual personalities. The book is pretty good in terms of grammar, although it's a bit different from the writing style I've been taught in regards to the paragraph spacing and comma's. The plot started out with merit I believe, but I'd say it lost some of that as it was drawn out. Maybe it would work better as a series rather than one solid ongoing plot in a single book? On a side note, I loved that the story initiated such a strong reaction, even as a negative, horrified reaction, it's brilliant and captivating. I could definitely see this as a paperback, something diverse and out of the box.

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