I've only read the first chapter, but I do want to continue on!
I find the intro chapter is too descriptive. The second paragraph is much better.
"Her long sandy blonde hair tied up into a thick ponytail at the base of her neck." is an incomplete sentence (from the sixth paragraph).
Could use a little bit of editing to tighten up the writing. Overall it is a beautiful chapter. The prose is a bit flowery, but it gives it this feeling, this tone that it needs. It's kind of predictable but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I would recommend this story to someone looking for a light but serious romance.
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