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I loved the opening chapter

"Then, my dreams open" A line that caught me off guard. I feel that his entrance to the dream is abrupt like did he sleep? did he get a heart attack like there is no explanation given. I hope my feedback will help you. Apart from this I am really liking your story will get back to you. I am still reading it.

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