Brinley B

I’m a 14 aspiring author and hope to someday publish my books once they are good enough to be published. Any helpful feedback would be much appreciated and please tell me if you like my work! :)

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Great!

This was amazing and very professional. I loved the different characters and all of their unique abilities. you are both great and amazing authors and you have really created something wonderful!

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Great

This was a gray read very interesting and I love the characters keep up the great work!

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Great

I really like the originality of this book and I think it is sounding great! I live the characters and the idea of them being named after the big fashion brands I can’t wait to read more!

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Interesting

I really liked reading this it has a great story Line and it’s is very intriguing, however the format of the story was really confounding and I had a hard time figuring our what was going on in the beginning. It started getting better throughout the story great job!

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Great!

I really enjoyed reading this and seeing the different feelings of all the characters it got a little confusing sometimes I didn’t know who was talking but I loved it and I can’t wait to read more!

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Is This Love?

This is amazing! It made me tear up which is weird cause I can never get myself to cry!

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So relatable

I really like this it's really relatable especially finding a boy! haha

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Thrilling!

I normally don't like scary stories cause I can't really handle that type of stuff, but I read this one and even though it was pretty creepy it was very good and I really enjoyed the writing style! I can't wait to read the next one!

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Amazing!

I loved this so much it is definitely something I would find interesting if I saw it at a bookstore or at a library! I love the relationships between the characters and the interesting powers they have! I love this book!

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Really good and original

I really like the style of the book. I like being able to see the different perspectives of the characters. I really like the idea of the story and the whole idea is very original to me. I would recommend more dialogue and some more interactions with the characters. It sometimes is a little bit confusing because I feel that it sounds rushed sometimes. I was the same way when I first started writing my book. I would also recommend making the chapters a little bit longer. Overall I am really excited to see where the story goes. Keep up the good work!

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Very intriguing and well written

When I first started reading this I was afraid I wouldn't like it because it is not the genre I am used to reading but I was mistaken. It turned out to be very interesting and I loved it! The author is obviously in a professional state of writing and I really enjoyed reading this wonderful book. The writing style was unique but it was still a very great read!

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Amazing and entertaining!

I loved this so much and I can not wait to read more! The relationships between all the characters were amazing and I love the fierceness of the Main Characters' relationship! I would definitely recommend this to anyone who loves a good love/hate story!

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So good!

This was very much like some of the books I have read about before and I really like the writing style. I was a little confused about the dialogue but other than that it was great! I totally would recommend this to anyone who likes to get caught up in a great book! And if you want more to read this book is part of an amazing series!

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Amazing!

I was very curious about this when I first started reading. I was very interested and couldn't stop reading. The author does a great job of introducing all of the characters and I can't wait to read more!

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It surprised me!

I was a bit hesitant to read this because it is not like most of the books I am interested in, but It ended up being really good. I encourage you to continue writing. The style was a little bit different than i was used to and the font threw me off a little bit, but overall it was great. One suggestion that I have is to work on your punctuation and maybe the different fonts.

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