B.W. Harold
@bwharold
Hi! I’m a freelance content writer and virtual assistant. I began writing at 12, I started with poetry. So I think I’ll share that first.
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Great start
I think you have some good setup here. Your format threw me a bit, but I adjusted. You are setting up some good dynamics here I hope to read more!
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Interesting concept
I’m glad to see you are back at it. I understand long breaks between writing. I look forward to the up-coming conversation. ;)
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Can't stop!!
I have been binge reading this for 2 hours! I see you have some technical issues (repeat chapters and such, ) but I really need to see how you make this work. I would love a story about the children of this couple!
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