callypso

Paris

Either do something worth writing, or write something worth reading.

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Very Interesting!

Overall this was a great story! I would simply encourage you to work on clarifying some of your writing. More than once I found myself baffled at your words, so work on transitioning more smoothly. Otherwise, I thought it was quite an interesting story. i especially liked the ending! Keep working on this, I see great things!

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