Carson

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Amazing story

I think this story is amazing. I love it. The grammar is not the best but that is it. Also you go a little fast. Within the first two chapters Peeta is already dead. A little quick. I hope you continue the story.

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Pretty short

I think this pretty good but also it is very short.

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Little mess ups there and there.

I love how you wrote this story. I think you have a lot of potential in writing books but there was one problem, you accidentally copied 2 words.. For example, the scene where he was trying to get to the surveillance room and he fell to the wall, it said and I quote "He shut his eyes and covered his ears, "Stop." Nick cried, grasping his his-" There, that was the only thing I noticed.

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