Chris Oca

Calamba City, Laguna

18. Author. Singer. Musician. Editor. Electronics Engineering Student.

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Interesting!

The line that caught me in this story is that they both have mind controls but they are unable to control themselves. Man, that's so cool. It hints the possibility that they might play with fire sooner or later (with their feelings).

Although, the plot between the attraction of two polar opposites is kinda common nowadays, I still think you have a very interesting story to tell. Not to mention all I read was just the beginning and this story has a long way to go.

More power in your writing! I'll look forward to your update in august!

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