Chrystian

Review

Best Book Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!

ReViEw

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

At the end of every chapter I wanted to keep reading. This Drarry Fan-fiction is a true work of fine art. I really enjoyed the unexpected twist(s) of Draco becoming pregnant and then giving birth to twins, DUMBLEDORE being the TRUE villain and LORD VOLDEMORT being the TRUE good guy, and finally.... Sirius and Lupin not ONLY being MARRIED but are HARRY'S FATHERS!!!
I was shocked but I #L.O.V.E.D. IT!!! The Names: Selene Artemis and Silas Apollo are just Adorable:)

Grammar/Punctuation could use a bit of touching up but... other than that- This is a really incredible piece of literature.

P.S.-

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!

I AM LITERALLY DYING WAITING FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!

REVIEW

I think it is decent. It has a good plot just needs more text.

"Gay Stories"- Review

Overall very good. I got very hard and horny well I was reading. Punctuation/Grammar needs work. LOVE IT THOUGH!!