citykim

Manchester England 🇬🇧

To All My Wonderful Followers, this is my goodbye note to you all. Thank you for taking the time to read my work I sincerely hope you enjoyed it.

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This was a very different story from what I would normally read but I was hooked from the beginning. I thought the characters were well-rounded and easy to understand and empathize with. It has a great plot and developed quickly holding the reader's interest well. It was quite an interesting subject to write about but it worked!!

Keep up the good work, publishers are always looking for something different from the mainstream!!

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I started reading this but quickly got lost. I did not understand the plot and I soon realized it was one of a series. If you have not read the others it is quite difficult to understand all the subplots. Having said that it is quite obviously not aimed at my age group. I do appreciate that younger people will enjoy this author's style of writing.
I would like to suggest you use a grammar/punctuation tool they are very helpful and most writers use them. [I do!!]

I am 100% sure that your story appeals to a very wide range of readers from reading the other reviews you are picking up quite a following. Well done and good luck for the future. Keep Writing!!

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