Inherited Extinction 1 Adam
This story is a reverse of so many other romance novels written. In a world where extinction and survival are prominent, the males generally find a female of any species to procreate with. In this book, the females are the dominant gender, and they will do anything to get a male to help procreate.
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The storyline is fantastic, although the execution needs a little work. You should add a little more details to your world and give Adam more of a child-like reaction to all the of the new things he is exposed to.
It isn't until he meets Celina that I realize the world doesn't have vehicles, and the villages seem old world. I would recommend creating a description of the world as Adam plans his escape from Gen-corp.
My other thought was Adam doesn't seem to acknowledge his surroundings or try to fight his way to Glasow to find Aaron. He seems to just go-with-the-flow.
I enjoyed the idea you have for the story, and your ability to create multiple characters with different personalities is good. It is hard to keep the personalities of each character separate.
I would also recommend going over your chapters and correct your punctuation. There are commas missing or misplaced, and some of the sentences needed a question mark instead of a period.
Keep up the good work!