Crixi

Great story

Your choice of words is poetic. You describe things in a way that seems to flow like a lover speaking to his mate. The genre is not my cup of tea and unfortunately, I didn't enjoy the book to continue with the story, but I can see how this story will be popular for the audience you want to target. Great work!
Happy writing!

Shocking

This story left me with my jaw unhinged and thirsty for more. It is like a horror scene you shouldn't look at, but you can't help but stare at it. I really hope you will write more of this story.

The plot and the storyline are excellent. The grammar and spelling are a bit off in some places, making it hard to understand what is taking place. I get this is a work in progress. I would encourage you to take the next step in publishing this book when you are finished.

Girl in Pain

The characters are beautifully written. I find myself immersed in the story and rooting for the heroin. I love the gentle soul you gave Cole and how he broke Oceana's vow of silence. There is healing from a deep wound. I am excited to see how the story ends.

Imaginative

I like how you chose to write an interpretation of the day-to-day life of a low income family. The story is depressing and insightful. It is not a story I typically read, however I cannot not leave Dave. The story pulls me along as Dave spirals deeper into depression. I keep wondering if something will inspire Dave to find his meaning in life of if he will finally exit the stage.
Over all, Exit Sign is not for everyone, but I appreciate the artwork. I will continue with Dave's journey until the end.
Happy Writing!

Sweet

Ceo falls head over heals for a assistant designer. both hero and heroine have a painfull past that they must overcome before acting ont he feelings theyn have for eachother.
Mathew is a goofball that kept me grinning while Sophia is a down to earth girl and loveable.
This was a good, safe read with a happy ending. Thank you for the warm fuzzy feelings.

Intriguing

The first two chapter are intriguing. I am interested to know how a human was able to keep up with a wolf. the second meeting made me more curious as to what will happen between Nathan and Kerian.

I would have liked to see the pack from Kerian's POV as he retuned home. How many wolves are in his pack? Is the omega (his mother) still alive? Who are his best friends?

I liked how you grabbed the reader and invited them into your world right away.

Happy writing and good luck!

Great Story

I love your imagination. You did well creating a plot and keeping mystery of who the hero truly is. I saw the growth in your writing which was a treat. Your chapters were too long and too discriptive. While the characters interacted you used "sigh" "aghm" in stead of "Sange sighed in frustaration" for example. I was a bit bothered by that, however later in the book, you stopped using those discriptions. Chapter 11 was an improvement from length and dialogue. I loved how you introduced each character and how you grew the bonds slowly. Over all the story has grown beautifully and I can't wait to see what happens next.

a twist to the apocalypse

I like the story. The story progresses very quickly with very little drama. The chapters do pull me along and keep me interested in what might happen next. The scripts need to be reviewed and edited. I will definitely keep reading the book. My only complaint is that the hero does not struggle much in the beginning. Perhaps create battle scenes from his home to the temple and how he survived the demon and zombie attacks. Overall I loved the twist you used to make a magical zombie apocalypse. It shows your imagination.
Good luck, and happy writing. Looking forward to more of the story!

Disturbingly erotic

I liked the story. I couldn't put it down. The writing style is a bit different for me, but it works for the purpose of telling the story. I got all the feelings. I was hurting for Elise, and mad at her for not fighting. I was a bit confused why dad was a loser and stayed out of his kid's business. The abuse is sickening and arousing at the same time. Great work. I am always a sap for a hero with the blazing glory of a God and rescues the maiden. I also like seeing the big strong dominate slowly soften to a cuddly puppy. I have a feeling the twins will soften up a little. Keep up the good work. Happy writing!