David Mux

I write what I feel. I love 💓 story telling. If you are looking for some mysteries, adventure and action. Read my stories tell me what you think. Wattpad username davidmux7

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Great Idea, strong lead but suffers from a confusing storyline.

The main character enticed me to to continue reading. I was hoping for an escalation to something magnificent. The story suffers from a confusing plot twist. I know this can be a great story if only it had interesting characters and a clear storyline to follow. You're doing great just work on the grammar, punctuation and dialogue.

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Great idea for a story but suffers from pacing and engaging characters.

I feel the story is a great idea but it suffers from pacing. It isn't as engaging and their are parts that require more clarity. I strongly believe it can be a great story if only the pacing, dialogue and grammar can be worked on. Happy writing and continue writing amazing stories.

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It's ridiculously good, thanks for sharing your story and thoughts.

It's an interesting wild ride. I thought such things only happen in the movies. I have to admit there's a lot of soul that goes into the story. Your writing style is brilliant but I would suggest you include something a bit more funnier. Overall I enjoyed it good read.

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