Dawn

Move

Why don't storm just move an go back to where her parents live bc now kensley is gonna be evil. U can tell chase cares about storm but not enough to be with her bc at the same time he likes to play games with her heart. She needs to show him that she can really move on by moving away from there bc if he really cares an wants her then he will come find her an show her. Let him feel the heartbreak for once

Pay back anytime now

I wish she would really give him a taste of his medicine an show him that he means nothing to her. She allows him to have to much power over her an I wish she would just put him in his place an treat him as he treats her. He acted like a good man to get her to marry him an once that happened he turned evil. So after all he's done an put her thru, I feel it's time for the tables to turn bc it's bs what she as a queen is being treated like by her own husband

Ace

I love the story jus wish we could also get Ace's pov

Book review

I'm loving this story so far just wish it was longer

Opinion on story

I love all ur stories the only thing I don't like it it takes a long time for u to update the stories, an then at times ur repeat a chapter that has already been written. An this last chapter was even shorter than it normally is. why is there only 5 chapters on this story now when I was way farther than this. plz lmk if ur gonna continue