2 Kapitel gelesen
"I love this novel its interesting I also think its one of the novels I have come across that is the best, at first I didn't like the way DARK died but after reading the end it was meant to be it was perfect Thank you author Lots of support❤👍"
37 Kapitel gelesen
"Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
0 Kapitel gelesen
"This chapter is so cute🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺. Already hooked based on chapter 1. I can't wait to read on. Definitely 5 out of 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟"
20 Kapitel gelesen
"Awww🥺🥺🥺"
0 Kapitel gelesen
"The starting is amazing. your story is great. Congrats"
36 Kapitel gelesen
"I'd say this is a great story. The story overall was really good, I enjoyed reading it a lot. A lot of emotions emitted from the story and that's a job well done, great job on that :D. The plot and writing style are also very good, and while technical skills are not one hundred percent, they are really good, so awesome job on that. I also liked the fact that it wasn't that cliche, mafia kind of book. That definitely made me enjoy the story a lot more, so kudos to the author for that. An overall great story, I'd definitely recommend it to anyone looking for something new to read."
0 Kapitel gelesen
"You my dear, have got a unique style of writing, I felt apart of me in the stories & it was absolutely amazing. Long story short is that I was charmed by your level of creativity & I think that a lot of writers can get to learn through your master piece, BRAVUDA !!! continue with the same spirit gal coz you have go places to go"
1 Kapitel gelesen
"I absolutely loved the first chapter 🦋💕 This book is such a heart-warming story ❤️💜❤️ The author has also done a very good job at describing the characters and that made me love the story even more ❣️❣️ This story reminds of a love story that is brought by fate 😍😍 This book definitely deserves more reads 👓 So, I'd suggest everyone to go check out this book right now because it's such a beautiful story 💜❤️💜 -Kookie 🍪💕"
2 Kapitel gelesen
"I am sorry for taking so much of time for this review. First of all, I totally loved the story. I was interested on reading it just from the first chapter. Probably just go back and make the sentences more intriguing. Lovely plot and background story. I suggest using some more vocabulary to make the story feel more powerful. I really loved it!!! All the best!! "
0 Kapitel gelesen
"Excellent beginning."
23 Kapitel gelesen
"This book is extremely good. There is a connection right on the spot with the two characters that make us love them immediately. Of course not just romance is in this book, but thriller. The characters both have a past that helps us understand them more. As well as them being threatened into separating from each other. It gets you teary eyed and sad but it is worth the read. I have to mention that this author has much better grammar then some people, and English isn’t even her first language, so cootos to the amazing author!!"
0 Kapitel gelesen
"I am a sucker for light and dark imagery and this story has it! With romance, heart, and poetic language, you will find yourself rooting for the characters and getting sucked into the heart of the story. Great work!"
32 Kapitel gelesen
"The plot and the way you constructed a way to readers to walk over the story is really good. Ray and Dark, names you chose did fitted. There are some spelling mistakes (like using 'Than' instead of "Then"). Nonetheless I loved the way you narrated the story. Ps: waiting to read rest of the story."
0 Kapitel gelesen
"I have only read a few chapters so far and I really like the story , the plot of the story is nice and the characters are relatable , keep up the good work "
3 Kapitel gelesen
"Really interesting story line and characters! It jumps straight in to the action which is really exciting but I also feel like you could slow it down a little! You can do this by having longer chapters just to explain the storyline a little more, but it’s still very gripping and fast paced! There are a few grammar mistakes which perhaps you could send it to someone to edit or to look over? 😊 I’m sure there are plenty of people willing to! It’s a very lovely written story so far, your descriptions are really beautiful!!! I’m also really liking Ray and feel incredibly bad for her and SUPER angry on her behalf 😭 Dark is also a very interesting character and I would love to learn more about him!!! I feel that the relationship between the two but I’m only three chapters in so perhaps you explain things more to make it clear, but I would just recommend slowing the pace with their relationship since I think it’s a little too fast! But they are super cute!!! 😉😉 I’m excited to find out exactly what happened to Ray and what will happen between her and Dark 🤔 I really love your writing style! You really make Dark’s house sound really warm and cosy and convey his kindness perfectly! Great job, lovely writing 😊 I wish you all the best! x"
0 Kapitel gelesen
"The story is amazing 😍 and just like it's name it's a sunshine 🌞 for readers. Every turn and twist was amazing. Hoping to see your more work."
0 Kapitel gelesen
"Shezz honey, this is an amazing story....There are tiny mistakes like you know the punctuation marks and little things like that but trust me you've done an amazing job my love...Everybody gets mistake at the beginning but you'll catch up when you're writing more stories okay...Other than that WELL DONEEEE babygirl....Hats off to you angel....Keep going....You've a great future....❤❤❤❤❤❤....Don't stop writing.... Keep smiling :)"
13 Kapitel gelesen
"There are some grammatical errors, but the author does really well for not being a native English speaker. I’m really enjoying this book, it gets better with every chapter. The relationship the two main characters have is absolutely adorable. The mystery circling around the characters pasts, keeps you wanting more. I can’t wait to see how the story plays out."
0 Kapitel gelesen
"The story took me from the 1st chapter to the last one I really enjoyed myself while I was reading it full of imagination your a good writer the way you put words together is really wowwww It's super good ❤"
28 Kapitel gelesen
"A beautiful story, full of imagination and descriptions, I am really enjoying it! It is magnificently written, just a few typos, nothing that can't be fixed with a click. If you are thinking of reading it well... just do! It is very inspiring and lovely, keep going! xoxo Constance"