deadbeatlamp

A fantastic story

Wow, I really really like this book. I haven't consumed a lot of System type media, but if this is what it's like, I'm now game. Honestly, this book is so tender and sweet, and the descriptions of the Weave of Fate are magical. I'm so glad I found this book, and I'm in love with Caderyn and William/Asterius. They're such great characters, and little Pluma is so cute! Not to mention the System itself. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but they can be overlooked easily for such an imaginative and wonderful plot. Keep writing!

Wow!

Five stars and I’ll tell you why: it’s a rich, engrossing scifi novel, one that traverses the human consciousness. The writing is excellent. I am in awe of the way this writer describes things; it’s like poetry. The plot is excellent and holds your attention. You wonder what will happen next! I’m excited for more. I really really am!

Good start

So far, this story is pretty good! There are some pitfalls like grammatical structure, but overall, the plot is really intriguing and the characters are all pretty decent.