Deum Jockets

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It was good on "fictionpress" and still good on "inkitt."

When I had first stumbled across this story, it gave me the most horrible case of giggles I had in awhile, so it was no surprise that this story would be funny the second time around.

My only regret is that I have no real criticism outside of, "make this longer."

-Resurgent Shad

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