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Dreamland:3

We are cousins, we both believe pineapple does not belong on pizza, one is a vegetarian while other is a die hard non veg lover, we are basically polar opps who are besties:D

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A good start!

So far, what I have read is really nicely written. The base of your storyline seems strong enough and I def am excited for the upcoming chapters. Though i would suggest a bit paragraph changing and a bit shortening of the chapter.. everything was interesting to read. Great work author!

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amazing<33

Really liked this one.. there were a few grammatical errors in the starting but other than that i think the novel's set up impressively. Great work author!

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Impressive!

really enjoyed reading this novel... the plot and all kept me on my toes for sure. the author's writing style was descriptive indeed and i am sure this book can get really popular for sure:)

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A cute and realistic love story!

The story seemed realistic which is an asset as well. Loved the characters of both Ty and June... great work author!

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Loved it!

Really loving how the story's going by... also the author's writing style is surely impressive. I would suggest breaking down a few long paragraphs into short ones, but other than that, this books' amazing<3

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Great work!

the storyline seems interesting enough, and the emotions and scenes are expressed in a manner i really appreciate. there are a few grammatical errors here and there, but overall the author has done a great job and I think this book can surely reach heights if continued in the same way🤍

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