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A nice read!

The blurb of the story seemed to arouse curiosity, also it was short and crsip. I absolutely loved the cover! There are a few things though that i felt the need to point out, first of all, there are many large chunky paragraphs which need to be broken down. As a reader personally, reading through long paragraphs can get tiring and people might skim through them rather than reading them. Other than that, I liked the storyline and also the novel moved on a steady pace. Good work author^^