Maddie

Wank Dickney Presents... Your Wet Dreams

Maddie puts a fresh x-rated twist on your favorite Disney classics with their retellings. Leann is currently on leave but Maddie thrives here and at @LittleMissMaddie and @dickneyshorts!

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This Book is Amazing

I really like this story (or at least the portions you've already released to your readers). Your book is still a work in a progress and I'm eagerly awaiting your next update. This book hooked me from the beginning and kept (and will continue to keep) me on the edge of my seat until the end. My only issue is that this book is advertised in a way that makes it seem like a simple love story between Lucifer and his Gift but there is so much more than that. The plot is very complex and I have to admit I got lost a few times throughout reading very closely. I definitely think some of the longer chapters setting up the plot should have been equally littered with cute scenes between Lucifer and Amirykal because their relationship just seemed to be more forced as time went on until they finally found each other again. But as I said before, I really enjoyed this book and the twists and turns of the plot made it even more interesting for me. I will for sure keep up with this story as it is updated! - M

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DUDE

HOW WAS THAT SO GOOD I AM STUNNED - L

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Needs Some Work

I know bad reviews aren’t always the thing authors want to see but I think it’s really important that we all know what people liked and didn’t like about our stories so we can learn from our past writing.

Personally, I love werewolf books. The dominant alpha male finding his mate is always appealing which is why I was blown away by your decription and knew that I had to read this book.

Sadly, that feeling faded over time.

Obviously the main character does not know anything about werewolves and she is new to this whole thing but by leaving the main character so far in the dark you are also confusing the reader. I made it all the way to chapter thirty before I felt like I was forcing myself to finish something I wasn’t really a fan of.

Throughout the book there were quite a few typos and grammar mistakes that made me do a fouble take to try and understand what message the author was trying to convey to me.

Additionally, there is no show and all tell in this story. You use phrases like “I screamed”, or “I ran” as your entire narration for the story making it seem bland and half done. Don’t tell the reader the character ran. Show the reader what kind of emotion thr character feels to make her want to scream or run.

Frankly, this book has potential but it needs a bit of reworking before it really gets to the point where I would continue reading it. I’m sorry, but this book really isn’t my favorite. - M

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SCREAMING

SCREAMING

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BEST EVER IN LOVE

BRB ONTO BOOK TWO

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Up Late

My preferred bedtime is 10:45 and it’s now 12:50 and I just finished and I swear it was just 11:20. However, I do think this book needs some editing. Other than that, though, I loved it!

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More Plz

Plz - L

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OBSESSED

I read this during my college classes at my catholic school because I stooped that low with this story. - L

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