Amazing so far!
Overall, I found this story to be very interesting! I was a bit disappointed that there wasn't more! I'm very eager to continue this story and discover what lies ahead for Royce. There were a few grammatical errors, but, in general, this was a good read! Well done!
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I've only read the first two chapters (so far). As a christian myself, I'm fascinated by this concept. I think you did a great job telling a story as well as offering up some interesting food for thought! I'm interested to keep reading and to see how Ty's dreams continue to impact his perspective on his brother, as I'm already thinking that there is something amiss with Colton. Overall, you are a very talented writer and I found this very easy to read - despite, primarily, being composed of exposition. I find that its different to come across a story that does less "showing" and more "telling", if that makes sense. Well done!
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