Thorns of Blood Red Roses
The title already sounds really interesting to me and I am looking forward to seeing how it plays into the story. Despite there only being two chapters, I feel like I already know your main character very well. You also hinted at her goals which is awesome because now I want to know how she's gonna achieve them. Amazing that you did flashback and foreshadowing in just two chapters!
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However, I did want to point out that some paragraphs are a bit long. I know you had a lot of describing to do in the beginning but I hope you add more dialogue in future chapters to smoothen out the read. I love the details you wrote on Rem's past, but you might want to spread out the information so it's not too overwhelming. With that said (since you've already published those chapters), you can remind the readers of those details here and there in the future chapters!
I hope you keep updating :)