Eastw00d

WA State

I like to write novels in different genres, but right now I'm writing some historical fiction.

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I want to read more!

Wow, this story made me feel all sorts of emotions. I felt sadness, anger, confusion and happiness all in three chapters. The characters feel real and multi-dimensional. The detail was just enough to fall into the plot and feel like I'm watching a movie. Anyone who reads this will surely be hooked like I am!

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Well Written

I'll be honest, romance that's more erotic isn't my thing. With that being said, the author still did an amazing job at capturing me with the first line of the first chapter. I also thought the description in the book was well written and would be an enjoyable read for anyone who does like this type of romance. Something else I noticed is the poetic structure of the book. I've never read a book written that way and it makes the story unique. Great job!

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I totally want to keep reading!

I love the whole plot of this story. I haven't read one that takes place in France that is so well written. I love the little bits of French here and there. It adds something special and makes the story feel more authentic. I was also shocked to learn what crime Ace is accused of. To be honest, I was worried this story would go in the wrong direction (because of the crime), however, I was pleasantly surprised, and thankful, to see this go the complete opposite way.

Another thing I really liked about the story is the descriptions. The way it's written allows me to visualize the whole story very easily. I especially liked the part in chapter 3 where the description painted a lovely image of the flowers.

The only thing I noticed that could be worked on, from what I've read so far, is the overuse of commas. I think if there was some revision then it would flow even more!

This review was long overdue. I'm sorry it took so long, the chapters are lengthy (which is something I like but it takes me a little longer!) and I wanted to take the time to read it properly. Great work, Nour! I will definitely keep reading this story!

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I love this story!!

The whole plot is interesting and your descriptions make imagining everything a breeze. The characters are well written and everything flows smoothly. I especially love that she questions the idea soulmates instead of just accepting it immediately. It's refreshing to see the female lead break away from the cliché. Great work! I haven't finished reading all the chapters, but I'll definitely keep reading!

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