I totally want to keep reading!
I love the whole plot of this story. I haven't read one that takes place in France that is so well written. I love the little bits of French here and there. It adds something special and makes the story feel more authentic. I was also shocked to learn what crime Ace is accused of. To be honest, I was worried this story would go in the wrong direction (because of the crime), however, I was pleasantly surprised, and thankful, to see this go the complete opposite way.
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Another thing I really liked about the story is the descriptions. The way it's written allows me to visualize the whole story very easily. I especially liked the part in chapter 3 where the description painted a lovely image of the flowers.
The only thing I noticed that could be worked on, from what I've read so far, is the overuse of commas. I think if there was some revision then it would flow even more!
This review was long overdue. I'm sorry it took so long, the chapters are lengthy (which is something I like but it takes me a little longer!) and I wanted to take the time to read it properly. Great work, Nour! I will definitely keep reading this story!