Emma

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Can't remember

Charmingly written story. I wish it was longer.

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Jason King III

Easy to read, I sped through the third part of this story. Not sure what to make of the Jason King character.

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Jason King II

Part II more interesting. Not sure what the author is doing here with this anti-hero Jason.

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I forgot already, sorry.

It could be longer, and less simplistic dialogue. I was impressed with the technical knowledge of the author.

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