Emmerson Winter

A writer of romantic mystery and suspense thrillers with a hint of the paranormal

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Where Spirits Roam

I have enjoyed your chapters so far. I liked the way the prologue set the scene and created the mystery of the captive, spirits and the importance of Eviee. There were some minor edits required and (although personal to me) I think it would read better fully in the past tense as it seemed mixed in some places. I would like to read how the story develops.

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Free Will

I am so disappointed there is only 1 chapter so far! I am always interested in past lives and enjoyed the way you launched straight into this, making the concept easily accessible, while creating plenty of mystery and suspense around what has happened in the past. I am eager to read more and only left a star off due to not having more content to base my review on. But I'll gladly come back and change that once I have read more!

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A Step Back in Time

I really enjoyed reading this. From the start I felt it was expertly crafted. and the writing was superbly constructed with a clear distinction between the voices of Hannah in the present and Hannah / Ursula in the past. Each chapter built the two stories and always ended leaving me wanting to continue on and find out more. I particularly enjoyed the historic elements which seemed well researched and (although I don't know about that particular time period) am sure they were all factually correct. As a reader it was great getting clues as to past links with people in Hannah's current life and those from her past.

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The Runaway

So this is not a text type I might ordinarily go for but I was interested in the description and found myself drawn in from the first chapter. Perhaps because of my lack of familiarity with the genre I was not sure if the characters were human or if the alpha / beta references meant something else. It was a bit gory but all in the context of the plot so I could understand why. The reveal at the end of chapter 3 was certainly a cliff hanger. There were a few places some minor edits would help - but nothing major. I would certainly be interested to read additional chapters as they are posted.

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