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Amazing!

Want something that rivals published authors' books? Something romantic, but not too much, with a pinch of humor and a dash of embarrassing moments that make you connect with a certain character? This book, although still in its youth, is the essential myriad of these things. Dive into this amazing story and you won't regret a single moment spent.

Tip for the author: Make sure to stay in one tense, rather than going to present and then flipping to past at the end of a chapter!

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Light-hearted and Witty

While the plot may be a bit too steady for most action-lovers' tastes, PLAGIUM is astonishingly witty, astoundingly well-written, and its cover is amazingly designed. A perfect short read for those with an eye for mystery but a heart for humor. I recommend!

Tip: I suggest to make the titles of the chapters a bit shorter -- it's a pain to see the have to hover over the whole thing and to remember which chap. you're in the middle of, especially since they all start with the words "in which". As for the actual title of the book, maybe shorten it to just Plagium instead of "a curious case of plagium"? It would make it much easier for a reader to find your story!

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A Must!

There are countless plots, events, and reveals throughout the story -- anything you could ask for is in here! The book features two characters who undergo such amazing character development that it's hardly possible not to get attached to them, and while the grammar and punctuation aren't perfect, the vocab is astounding and will leave you with a vivid image of every chapter.

A must-read if you love books with romance, struggles, and everything life has to offer.

The badges adorning the cover rightfully belong there, as this is a beautiful and splendid story and it deserves every medal it shows off.

Last suggestion: In my opinion, the cover should be a bit more vibrant (maybe try working with silhouettes?) -- and the badges would come off better if they were with a transparent background! The best website I've found that removes the background off of any image is called Canva, Give it a shot! https://www.canva.com/

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Better Than It All!

While there are some grammar mistakes, I love everything about this book so far -- the plot, the characters, the writing... everything. Apart, they are enough to blind the reader with emotions. Together, they form the quintessential romance book, ideal for any kind of reader. Better Than That really is better than it all when it comes to these elements, and I 100% recommend this story!

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A Mellow Romance Must-Read

The plot is moderate and undemanding, which, if you're an action-lover, isn't the ideal, but the author makes up for it with amazing vocabulary and feelings that make you want to read a paragraph over and over again. However, there are too many sentences -- and by which I mean that where there could be one sentence that explains something, five take its place but provide no more detail than the former. This has a danger of boring the reader -- be careful!

The cover is beautifully made, and perfectly captures the essence of the story. I'd say you've got an amazing book on your hands -- and I'd definitely recommend it. A mellow romance must-read.

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Great!

While the story is still in its first chapters, it's evident that the plot will be full of twists and turns, leaving the readers on the edge of their seats. The grammar & punctuation do need some reviewing, but nothing major.

One suggestion? The plot will most definitely be interesting, but I think the story would be more captivating if the pace of it was faster. Moreover, try not to elaborate too much on a certain small detail for fear of losing your audience, and rather focus on the big events of the story.

All in all, this is great read for a couple minutes' time to spare, and certainly not a waste of time! I look forward to new chapters.

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