C h a p t e r O n e
POV de Ry
—Firma aquí —dijo el tío Barry, el abogado de nuestra familia, señalando el documento blanco con su dedo índice, corto y rechoncho.
No es mi tío de sangre, pero lo considero como tal. Es el mejor amigo de mi padre. Lo son desde que estaban en pañales. Adoro al tío Barry; siempre me ha tratado como a un hijo, a pesar de no tener hijos propios. También me ha sacado de problemas un montón de veces, pero hoy no podrá ayudarme con esto. Su cara de pocos amigos lo dice todo.
Lancé una mirada al rostro impasible de papá. Me dio un asentimiento seco, vigilándome con cautela, como ha hecho toda mi vida.
Apreté el bolígrafo con fuerza, sintiendo que estaba a punto de partirse entre mis dedos.
Estoy ganando tiempo.
nice....
pls support mine too 😊
Hi Jceelove,
I just finished reading your story “The Agreement” and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how compelling it would look as a comic.
One scene that really stood out is in Chapter 1, when Ry Westbrook is blindsided by a marriage contract his father has signed on his behalf. The tension is palpable as Ry grapples with the shock of the arrangement, his anger simmering beneath the surface. The moment is charged with emotion, and the internal conflict Ry experiences would translate beautifully into comic panels. The use of close-ups on his clenched fist, the cold expression of his father, and the weight of the contract itself would create a powerful visual narrative.
That blend of suspense, emotional depth, and dramatic tension makes The Agreement feel tailor-made for a comic adaptation. The complex characters and intricate plot would look incredible in illustrated form.
I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though.I just believe your work would look amazing in visual form.
You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username – Eve_verse) so we can bring the suspense and emotional depth of your story to life visually. I’ll be waiting to hear from you!
Regards,
Evee