Evelyn53

I'm a 18 yr individual . that writes for a hobby while living life to the fullest.

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Television worthy

You wrote a good book. The characters make me angry and I like that the story is good and that it can make a person have mixed emotions.
the plot is good and the realistic parts. makes the story even better.
you have amazing twists and turns and that's amazing traits for a book.
good job and keep writing

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Envious

This book is so down to earth. from a walk on the beach holding hands to having a bite to eat at Mc. Donalds. It has so many realistic situations that individuals have to go through on a daily basis. And the Characters Oh my gosh Im in Love. describing the problems that the characters face and how they deal with it is amazing. It's so realistic and believable. I only read A few chapters but Im in Love with your Book Micheal. and It gives Girls and Guys Hope that Love is Out there even though we have or problems and issues. So,
I'm going to follow Zack and Adam and see where this goes.
Micheal, you are a brilliant author and I look forward to reading more chapters and more books to come.

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Advanced

I wasn't expecting the change in the story and it was really amazing how you eased that dramatic change in. that was so unexpected. Well, it was unexpected to me. Also, Your choice of words really enhanced the scene and vision throughout the story. Which makes your story very hooking. I felt like I was in the interrogation room observing what was taking place. How The character was feeling. Your writing style needs no improvement. I believe this is as good as it gets.

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heart warming

This story touches on desires that are longed by many, including myself. The characters are easy to relate to. and the connection with the characters is amazing. even the way you delivered your story i felt like i was in the book observing listening to every word the characters were saying. Just point out you're an amazing writer. this book is definitely on my re-read list.
you did a great job on this book and i hope to read many more books from you. this book is definitely worth a read. it's heartwarming and puts you on the edge of your seat.
you did well.

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inspiring

I believe this book can move a lot of mountains when it comes to younger children. I feel like if i read this book to my future kid. His or her self esteem and self-confidence would be off the roof and he or she would help others. So this book Could be an example of the movie Pay it Forward. If I would have read this book when i was younger maybe my own self-confidence and self- esteem would be different than it is now. It's amazing how This book is relevant in every age and period in people's life so congrats on that and your book is definitely worth a read.
Good job, Keep writing, and keep inspiring others. your inspiration will move mountains.

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Evelyn

this book is really amazing. i look forward to following Dessa and Ly on there journaey because i really ship them. I only follow 1 ongoing book but this book I'm going to follow all the way through. you are a amazing writer. I saw no grammar issues. and i just love everything about this book. i look forward to the next chapter and more to come. Good Job.

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Amazing story

This book is very good. I am really angry about the council and how they disregarded the commanders theory about what's going on.
But the story is good your grammar fits the time the story is in. Everything is amazing. It's a excellent book with amazing plots. It's worth a read and a recommendation.

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You put your all into this book.

Everything in this book is amazing. Your grammer fits the book. Your punctuation is amazing. Your book is flawless. I never read a book like this but, it pulls you in. Its worth a read and alot of recommendations.

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Heart pulling

This book can be an inspiration to many. Especially, when the book touches on sexual assault and abusive relationships. My heart reaches out for Ashley and Jake. this book allows the reader to connect on a personal level with the characters. which is definitely worth a lot of reads. I just love how Ashley can lose herself with Jake and Jake is there to protect her and let her let lose and be happy. I believe this book has meaning. and its definitely worth being recognized.
Good job. I look forward to more chapters.
It is an honor to read such an inspirational book and I plan to follow it all the way through.

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Evelyn

you wrote an original, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. I usually don't read mystery but this book is pretty good. I love the cliff hanger vibe. it fits the book. the plot is amazing. everything is amazing. this book is worth a read. I plan on letting people know about this book. keep your inspiration and keep on writing.

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Evelyn Allen

The book is amazing. You just have to work on some punctuation and grammer issues. This book reminds me of the hobbit trilogy but a amazing twist. I usually dont read books like this but its good .

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Review by evelyn

The plot is amazing. But the beginning holds a lot of information.
Overall the story is amazing and it pulls you in. I'll recommend this book.

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