evenss219

@evenss219

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Terrific

A spooky short story. I like how the author builds up toward the end, and leaves u guess I g what is haunting the mc

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Reminds me of Scream

On the plus side I definitely got some Scream movie vibes from this movie. Classic scene where we get a teenage victim all alone before someone or something kills her. I found the author style of writing to be ok. I mean there are moments where he/ she uses the word “ said” where “ thought” would have been better. That is my opinion.

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Good book

Only on chapter 1, but so far a good read. The first chapter will catch any action fans eyes. It is an eye opening chapter that will make you read the rest of the book.

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Chapter 1 was ok

I am looking forward to reading the rest. Hard to give an opinion right now, but there are hints at more to come. The writer can craft a world.

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A very good horror story.

The friction of the characters where dead on. I felt like I was right there with them in every scene. For a horror story there is not much blood in gore. This story relies a lot on having a tense atmosphere that generated fear as you read it. You are just waiting for a monster to jump out and start killing the characters. The author should turn this into a full length novel.

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Good

Good book with an intriguing plot

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