Lost Home

Hazel

21 chapitres lus

Lost home

"A good story. Really like it. But the end though... without wanting to spoiler, the end is sooo.... plz write a part two, they deserve more... "

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kedbing123

17 chapitres lus

Such a great read!

"I have very much enjoyed this book! I havent read anything in awhile and i have picky tastes but this was a very touching book! Just needs to check grammer."

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Larisa

21 chapitres lus

Lost home

"It was a great reading... But the end... Come on.... All the love ❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Interesting

"I loved the book hated the ending, I cried and iy was a real eye opener as i realized that there are people like this, who have felt this "

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Amanda

21 chapitres lus

Lost home

"I like this book. It was very captivating. Very much the daily life so many lost children. "

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Nina

21 chapitres lus

I need a update

"Omg I need an update. This story is like a rollercoaster and I’m an adrenaline junkie"

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KLI

3 chapitres lus

Conflicted

"I liked it but I started to dislike carter when he decided to tell her family her secret with her not even in the room, or a heads up. That for me was a betrayal. Her father did fail her as soon as his new family came into the picture. He ignored her and praised Angie all the time. Many things are swept under the carpet and I don’t like that. The grammar didn’t bother me at all. "

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Katepalli

21 chapitres lus

Nice story

"Nice story to spend some time with "

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Rita

20 chapitres lus

It's a really great book. I was kind of cryin.

"So... I thing the writing and grammar should be better, but I'm sure the authors knows that. I definitely recommend this book to people who dont understand what it's like to be abused, and how it really affects some one. Overall this is great book. "

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booksndogs

21 chapitres lus

Liked the story but...

"I liked the story and it is defective of someone who has gone through abuse. I understand there aren't happy endings for everyone in life but I think there could have been a happier ending. The reason is this book had the opportunity to give hope to lots of abuse victims out there that read it but instead it failed. On a technical note the spelling needed to be edited better. "

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Lost home

"Its a good story, but why have morgan have to die in the end, its not logical? I think its better that she try to commit suecide but survive, because its a story of surving the odds."

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BethRose

21 chapitres lus

Great story but needs some serious editing

"Great story. Very well told, but the poor spelling and punctuation really let it down"

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Sarah Sutton

12 chapitres lus

Lost Home

"Very good book, definitely love the plot. It wasn’t the cheesy ending like every other book."

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fantastic

"I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, I would like it if you could continue the book. That would be great. Thanks."

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Not the best

"The writing is choppy and doesn’t really make sense at times. The plot line has a lot of holes."

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Lily

5 chapitres lus

Lost home

"Hey there!.I see your story seems quite interesting.I tried to force myelf on reading but I could not due to grammatical errors.It needs serious editing.Please!"

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krishyl2

21 chapitres lus

Lost Home

"This is a very powerful story and you have written it well. I thought some parts were rushed and others had room for development (ec: Lizzie working on rehab and Solomon’s presence in the family). Also there were a lot of typos that distracts from the flow of the story. I recommend having and editor to help with this. Good story and I loved Morgan’s character development. I don’t know how closely it mirrors the burdens of those who have suffered like Morgan did, but I appreciate this possible insight and it make me want to help many of my friend who probably go through the same hardships in life. Thanks for that, but the ending left me unsatisfied. How come it seems like she just dies? How did she die? And what about Kasey’s wedding, her starting a family, or her possbly becoming a police officer for abuse victims? There is room to grow here and I felt the ending cut off this story’s potential."

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It was okay

"It was okay work on grammer"

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Scarlet

21 chapitres lus

Lost Home

"The only problems I have with this book is the grammar and punctuation, and the ending. It's a great book if you can get past the mistakes in grammar, but the ending was the worst one I have read yet. Nothing is explaining what exactly happened in that scene and it definitely doesn't connect with the rest of the story. I still reccomend it, but beware that you won't be happy with the last chapter."

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Lost home

"Great book despite the grammer issues... Just a bad ending"

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