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I love it!!

I love the way the story started, it was captivating and it really draws you in! I also love the use of mythology and I hope you really delve deeper into it as it will help establish a sense of culture for the protagonist. Also I love the use of pop culture references! It really helps build a connection with your audience.

To further improve your writing (it’s not bad don’t worry it’s actually really enjoyable :)) I think doing more showing and less telling would make it stronger and less reliant on dialogue ++ it would help make the world stronger

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