It's an interesting story, the blurb and quote intrigued me and made me want to read more. I thought the opening paragraph interesting seeing Elias reading Banksy, it's different and makes the reader feel curious about Elias' character and get to know him better. The incident with the cheese is amusing and makes the reader chuckle.
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I found quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes though, and that jarred with me as I was reading. Maybe this is a first draft in which case such errors can be understood, but just thought I'd point it out anyway in case there were some you'd missed. I've listed some examples.
Paragraph 3: stuff giant bear = stuffed
Paragraph 5: scrunch nose = wrinkles his nose (my suggestion)
Paragraph 10: A fucking physico = psycho, psychic? not sure which word you're aiming for here
You make Elias swear using the f-word a lot of times and I don't think that's necessary, it's a very emotive word and I don't think it's use is justified here.
Also: Elias or Eilas? You've got two spellings. I assume you mean Elias. You've written Eilas in the Blurb and quote.
Hope I don't sound too harsh about the spellings, just wanted to give you honest feedback :)