Hadassah Smith

If I ever go looking for my heart's desire again, I won't be looking any further than my own backyard, because if it isn't there, I never really lost it to begin with. -Dorothy Gale (Wizard of OZ)

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I thought your story was good, but there were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. The details you put into your story were good, but they seemed a little over the top, maybe tone them down a bit? Another thing is that I thought your story was a very slow read because I had a hard time getting into the story.

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