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It's like a whole new world created by the author's magical fingers! The story kept me fascinated until the end. If you are a greek mythology geek, then you would LOVE this book. I really love how the story is written in a way as if the author was the one who created the entire universe herself. Her descriptions were truly vivid and the way she wrote the chapters were truly a dear to read and enjoy! Definitely a new fan! :)

My Symptoms after the Antidote

This book cuts really deep. It pierces your soul in ways you never thought it could, yet it also warms your heart knowing that someone out there felt the same way as you and made it through the dark. < 3

The poems were really descriptive and the words were just...beautiful. It took me time to read the entire thing though because it hits home a little too much for me, but it is an amazing read! A gem as one may say. :D It's the right amount of 'sentimental' for me to be re-rooted on my ground. Although some poems were a bit too long for my liking (That's just my preference. Please don't let that intimidate you.), but the time for reading each of them was worth it.

My take on In My Mind

Honestly, the plot is great and it has a whole lot of potential; however, the downside of this is the fluidity of the paragraphs in each chapter and some grammar errors here and there. Punctuation wasn't really followed for some, but this did not really bother me much in terms of the reading. I feel that with some editing and some more effort in adding more descriptions (perhaps using other terms/synonyms to describe what's going on may help in altering this into a better-written story!)

Overall, the plot keeps you on your toes and will leave you wondering what'll happen next! Keep writing! and God bless! :D

My take on The Haunted Town

The plot was original. It was really good that it kept me guessing on who's actually who, and it did keep me on my toes most of the time, especially near the end. In my opinion, the story could be better. I feel like if you could work on the descriptions and the emotions of the characters, plus the grammar and the technical side of writing, specifically, the spacings in each line/paragraph, this could actually be more intense and horrific.

To be honest, I felt like the plot lacked more gruesome details. I don't know about you, but I'd like a horror story with more on the scary side--the kind that could give me nightmares. But that's just me. This is still a good start for a first novel, so kudos to you for being able to finish it! :D Thank you for sharing!

Keep writing and getting better! You have a bright future ahead of you. :D

It's Raw and Honest

Honestly, the entire time I was reading, I felt like I was seeing myself in the mirror. It's definitely a book that is relatable for many people. I love how the author just expresses her thoughts and her emotions. It gets better and better as I kept reading. You definitely don't want to miss this book out. Kudos to you, author! Keep it up!

Spectacular!

The plot is absolutely captivating! Never a dull moment I swear. It's my first time wanting to read more in this BL genre. The suspense can be too much, but, again. That's what makes it all the more exciting! Can't wait for more. This got me really hooked!

Keep writing, Grey! You are awesome. 👏👏👏 Kudos to you! ❤

Pain is Real

I honestly love the plot of this book. It didn't really warm up to me at first, but as soon as the characters started releasing what they feel inside, the pain, it really captured my attention by then. I like how pain is portrayed in the story and how they are healing each other. I really find that heartwarming. 💯 If anyone wants to read a relatable story, read this book.

Although the technical side of writing still needs some work, grammar, punctuation, and tenses-wise, it's overall an enjoyable read. Great job!

Lost Heirs review

This story's plot is really promising, and I like the way the author builds up suspense in this mystery book. The way the story was written is like a classic book, such as Wuthering Heights and Jane Eyre, in which are really good books, but are difficult to decipher in some parts. Personally, the style of writing is not my cup of tea, but that is just my preference. If you are a classics fan, you'll definitely love the way this is written! My only concern really is the grammar and punctuation of this book that needs some tweaking, most especially the start. Other than that, it was a good read! Best of luck to you and keep writing! :D

There's still room for improvement

The plot is quite promising and it keeps readers on their toes most of the time! Although the descriptions of the scenarios could still improve, the story is progressing nicely. There were some minor errors in terms of grammar (like "didn't noticed," it is to be written as "didn't notice"), and some awkward phrases here and there (like "which he used to send flying my gun" --> "which he used to send my gun flying towards the opposite direction." AND "but didn't realize of the detonator." --> "but failed to realize the presence of the detonator.") Like what I've said earlier, description is what is lacking in the story, but it is readable and enjoyable. Best of luck to you, my friend!