Isabela

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Unique and creative plot

Let me start by saying I am loving the story!
The descriptions are thorough and clear, the story is really creative and unique, and the plot got me hooked from the first chapter. And your writing style is great!
I only had a problem with the way that sometimes things move too fast and some details don’t seem to make sense. Like how Dean becomes the leader without any discussion, how 20 teenagers can build two villages in a month, or how all of a sudden everybody is killing each other just because of Dean.

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