J. Alleyn Winchester

Virginia Beach

My love of storytelling was born from a love of reading. Inspired by bedtime stories with my dad, adventures filled my mind. Writing has always been my dream to share with the world.

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Lion Shifter so far...

First and foremost, this story has amazing bones! You have set up a great foundation and characters to play with, and I'm curious to see what happens after these two chapters. That being said, I noticed a lot of run on sentences. This is easily fixed though, and its common in early drafts. Can't wait to have Mr. Tiger's Eye come back!

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Paranormal Agency Book 1 The Soulless

Thus far, the story is fascinating! The characters are very real and honest. The only trouble I've faced is the paragraphs. Having dialogue start in the middle of a paragraph makes me back up to see if I missed something. I find it better to start a new line when dialogue begins, even if it's just a sentance. That could just be my old habits from English class though. Other than that, it's just some little things, like a spelling error or missing comma, that come to mind.

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