Jayce Calma

The Cataclysm

The plot of the story is really good, it's actually refreshing to read this type of genre/story. The flow of the story is good, and word choices are on point as well. On the other hand, there are some sentences that could be shortened or broken into another sentence 'cause it's too long and may seem overwhelming to the reader (I have placed feedback on that area). The writing style is also great, not hard to read :) Keep up the good work! P.S. I would like to give you a small tip! I've been using this editor and this helped me a lot! http://www.hemingwayapp.com/