Jennifer Brian

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love vampires!

Just finished the book and I really liked your writing style, especially switching the points of view amongst the characters. The plot was great and I loved seeing a female as the most powerful and dominant vampire. The only thing I think I was yearning more for was seeing more of Scarlett's dominance and "bad ass" capabilities (for lack of a better term haha). Overall though great job!

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I loved the plot to this story. You brought a unique perspective to shape-shifting and the fantasy world. I love post-apocalyptic type novels. I wish you would've expanded more on how the Earth changed and the causes of these changes. The idea of a mutation in genes after a dramatic shift in the environment of Earth is brilliant (I am a science nerd).

I also love the story being told from different character's points of view, which is similar to my novel. The only note I have on this is in some cases you repeated the same scene going from parker to lyric or vice versa. Maybe could have one of them thinking back to the conversation and surmising how they felt or what they were thinking in the moment? Just an idea.

As far as the technical part, I do feel there were many places missing comas to show pause, or you could even use and "Em dash," as well as a few other grammatical errors. These can easily be worked out!

Overall I loved the plot, the story, and the message. I was drawn to the characters and felt true emotion. You captured what it means to be in love very well. It's easy to feel love but very hard to convey it in words, but job well done. Last comment....I love how you ended the book! Sets it up perfectly for the next novel and leaves the reader on edge.

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From the very beginning, I could tell that I was going to love your writing style. Your attention to detail painted a vivid picture of the scenes, character's personalities, and the plot. As I continued to read, the plot began to build layer upon layer, until I couldn't put the book down. I just had to know what was going to happen next, and I kept finding myself asking more questions. Why did her father leave? What did he know? What has happened to him in England? What is Hannah's purpose? Has it already happened in the plot and we are unaware?

The more and more I kept reading the more and more I pictured this book as a movie (which I think it would make a great movie). Overall, job well done and I can't wait to read more.

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different is good

While it took me a couple chapters to really get into the book, I thought it is a brilliant idea. I have never read another book like it and agree with Jan. The book definitely has movie potential with the main focus on Rufus. I also like the environmental ties and the animal perspective. Coming from an environmental and science background and knowing a lot about the exotic animal trade, I thought it was very unique. Great job!

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