Jennifer Brian

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love vampires!

Just finished the book and I really liked your writing style, especially switching the points of view amongst the characters. The plot was great and I loved seeing a female as the most powerful and dominant vampire. The only thing I think I was yearning more for was seeing more of Scarlett's dominance and "bad ass" capabilities (for lack of a better term haha). Overall though great job!

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From the very beginning, I could tell that I was going to love your writing style. Your attention to detail painted a vivid picture of the scenes, character's personalities, and the plot. As I continued to read, the plot began to build layer upon layer, until I couldn't put the book down. I just had to know what was going to happen next, and I kept finding myself asking more questions. Why did her father leave? What did he know? What has happened to him in England? What is Hannah's purpose? Has it already happened in the plot and we are unaware?

The more and more I kept reading the more and more I pictured this book as a movie (which I think it would make a great movie). Overall, job well done and I can't wait to read more.

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different is good

While it took me a couple chapters to really get into the book, I thought it is a brilliant idea. I have never read another book like it and agree with Jan. The book definitely has movie potential with the main focus on Rufus. I also like the environmental ties and the animal perspective. Coming from an environmental and science background and knowing a lot about the exotic animal trade, I thought it was very unique. Great job!

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