An interesting story with nice descriptions, and interesting character developments. Congratulations on your other reviews. I do have a few questions about the plot. I’m a fledgling writer and make no claim to be the end all re: plot or writing generally. Let me know your thoughts on my thoughts.
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The main character knowing immediately that she needed to do something with the gem at the house seems problematic. How did she know? It wasn’t obvious to me. I think giving her more clues or letting her find out once there would work better. Why is she willing to go to a deserted, possibly haunted house, at midnight, and alone? If she was a spiritualist possibly, but a past violinist now running a symphony? What from her past drove her to go at all, let alone under those circumstances? Whatever happened to her at the end needs to be explained too. I expected her to be trapped in the room and the spirit be freed, but that didn't appear to be the case. I don’t know what happened.
I’d love to hear your responses. All the best with your writing!