Delana

Perth, Australia

"Until I feared I would lose it, I never loved to read. One does not love breathing." - Scout Finch, To Kill A Mocking Bird.

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Interesting start!

Firstly, thank you so much for leaving me a review! Much appreciated!

Next, your summary was great - left me wondering how the plot was going to go. Suspenseful as well! In addition to that, the very first chapter was already intriguing me, what with the mysterious 'Element" and the flashback.

Poor Rowin, literally having no one else to rely on. I liked how you managed to highlight exactly how alone Rowin has become with the incorporation of the 'ghosts' of her family members. I can't wait to see how much more Rowin will grow as a character, seeing how grounded she is currently but still retaining some bits of humour.

Can't wait for new chapters!

Cheerios!
Delana

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