Right Up My Alley
Masterful. I've been a fan of the sword & sorcery and fantasy genre all my life, my own work, ShadowWalker, is sword & sorcery set in post modern times, and all I can say after what I've read is The Unforgiven Tomes, The Memory Stone is like finding an oasis of originality in what was beginning to appear to become a desert of same old same old. While there are a few punctuation issues that you may want to address the story and plot is tight and your pacing is on the money. The overall flavor of the story? A bit cocky which, as far as I'm concerned, makes it that much more fun and enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you take this as well as looking forward to whatever other works you might have in store.
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